Cdub Coast Report Feedback
Chiara posted,
Well, I've done two Coast Longboarding articles for
Concrete Wave now, and I was kinda hoping for some
feedback from those of you who've given the articles a
read-over.
I'd like to know what ya'll think? What I should be
including that I'm not? The tone? What works and what
doesn't? Blah Blah Blah. It's a tricky project...
Representing Coast without being crass and using the
word "Fuck" a lot. I've tried to keep it sort of fun and silly,
given the target audience. Anyway, Let me know.
After all, everything I have to say is about you!
On this note, if anyone has anything to say, a message to
send out or whatever, drop me an email and It'll be
included in the next issue.
2009 January 21 2:08 AM
replied,
Constructive criticism: Trying writing a little less. I felt
that some of the event recaps were a little too long. I
started skimming through the article. i only read the
first report though.